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where shadows tease

i want you by moonlight
a waltz in the garden

i want you by firelight
passion’s heat caressing

i want you by starlight
with dreams in your eyes

i want you by candlelight
where shadows tease the walls



by PoetOfLight (Viewed 289 times)

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Given By: david lavisher
Critique Date:02/28/2008
Critique:It can't be more romantic than that, I can add a small alabaster table, single red rose and a swirl of soft sweet perfume to each 'wanting' and it does it for me. I don't know if you've heard of Jack Vettriano the unusual romantic artist, your poem reminds me very much of his work. Strong imagery works every time for me. Good stuff. 
Grade:Good


 
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