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Standing at the Gate

 



I seek the lesson of decernment


to question, to seek
truth above untruth


awareness of the patterns
and my place within


to stand at the Gate where the spark manifests
the physical expression of the divine


myself,


within the divine
the divine within


myself,


unseparated, prepared to ascend


with the gift of
Resplendent Consciousness


 


 


 



by Luna Tique Fringe

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Other Critiques of this Work
Given By: soulpath
Critique Date:03/05/2009

Critique:Excellent use of vocab, precise, spiritual, excellent

Grade:Excellent


Given By: Musimwa
Critique Date:03/04/2008

Critique:Good work, the wording is excellent. I love it. Uare  religious my dear. Keep this up

Grade:Excellent


 
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