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February 14th …

 

February 14th

I

My people I call dear,

If those who peep at reality with soft a glance, this earth carries none;

How sad was this dwelling going to be?

Like grass, allow them to flourish

Let them bloom like the Jacaranda in October.

For as hidden like a violet upon woods is their secret scent.

Trafficking in mockery saved the mocker:

The art of laughing long have I mastered,

February 14th is my witness!

II

No pointing rough fingers at each other,

Even raising arms of protests,

Forget polishing others with unheaven-worthy names,

Exchanging bittersweet phrases, must we all drop:

When one sees life from but a different angle.

So let it be in these our changing times,

That whoever is struck to his or her naked sentiment

No crooked judge should be appointed to pass a verdict.

The art of laughing long I have mastered,

February 14th is my witness!

III

Street corners, tunnels, parks, name them all…

Parade: Roses, Lilies or Ferns, bloody red.

Such a reflection of hearts they never match.

A dim resemblance of how unique our being is.

Scented, chocolated, colored heart like printed

Mugs, cards, cakes, clothing even people

Is the order of the very day in question:

Thus , I am remained of the Bible’s paradise.

The art of laughing long have I mastered,

February 14th is my witness!

IV

A belief, an idea, a slogan or a song

That money has given a head and face;

My fellow dwellers of earth have defined Love!

They went further with their equation;

Material plus materials gives you Love!

You have cash even love track after you.

This song has the world’s modification

Leaving the poor man enjoying it like a dream

For no sticky a red rose, he can afford.

Who said Valentine’s Day is those very expensive goods?

The art of laughing long have I mastered.

February 14th is my witness.

V

A year ago, on a friend, my neighbour it did happen,

On the so called “Val’s Day”.

He like his modern fellow,

Those scented, chocolated, colored and heart like commercial articles

On the roadside, did he purchase: cash and carry!

To his sweetie and dumped for the first time ever since.

We held our breath when his sweetie opened a shop that very evening

And named it: “Give us Love Enterprise”

The followed day, another in our neighbhood like a circus elephant stood engraved;

“Not Just Material things!”

Within a week, ten more were built and opened.

It was a lesson we all carried;

Those who were showered with them on “Val’s Day”

So lonely hearts did they carry.

I had perfected the art of laughing long;

14th February is enough for my witness….

 



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Other Critiques of this Work
Given By: nyamande
Critique Date:07/16/2010

Critique:The art of laughing long have I mastered, February 14th is my witness!       Outstanding!Awesome! Incredible! Mouth-watering! Need I say more   It was a lesson we all carried; On the roadside, did he purchase: cash and carry!

Grade:Excellent


Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:03/05/2008

Critique:A very pleasent thought here. One does not need material weath to win over love, sometimes it is the little things you do that impress others and those things come from the heart. Nicely written, Dennis

Grade:Excellent


 
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