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| Given By: |   Sgt B 
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| Critique Date: | 08/21/2009 |
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| Critique: | The imagery used was real. You could see them as you read this. Great Job Dennis!
~Ron~ |
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| Given By: |  philwriter
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| Critique Date: | 04/22/2009 |
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| Critique: | Nice imagery, puts you in mind for the season. good use of color scheme |
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| Given By: |  enamoured
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| Critique Date: | 09/12/2008 |
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| Critique: | Pretty! Pretty! Pretty!! LOve the haiku!! The colouring scheme augments it's beauty.Good thinking!! the last line is my favourite! Hmmm... I wish spring was on its way rather than winter. |
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| Given By: |   bluemoon
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| Critique Date: | 09/10/2008 |
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| Critique: | An interesting write and visual experience, very cleverly done. Your words and colours are so full of incongruity and yet somehow it all ties together so beautifully. The colours used and the first two lines compliment each other, but they are not at all what you would expect from the title. Your last line, although contradictory to your colour scheme, fits with the title and completes the link. The use of colour has taken your write to a whole new level. Really interesting, thanks. Four stars for the concept. |
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| Given By: |  CountryAngel
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| Critique Date: | 09/10/2008 |
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| Critique: | Hi Den,
Very nice Hauki.
I like the Halloween colors to. |
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