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Hearts, in Spring

To our smiling ears,
Birdsong blossoms in the air
~ Hearts, in spring, take wing.



by PoetOfLight (Viewed 224 times)

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Other Critiques of this Work
Given By: Katina
Critique Date:04/25/2008
Critique:I am such a fan of your haiku's! You should join in the Spring Poetry Workshop to help inspire the new haiku writers, "hint, hint."
Grade:Excellent


Given By: Sgt B
Critique Date:03/31/2008
Critique:It seems spring is inspiring everyone as this seems to be a popular topic lately. Nice poem thank you for sharing it with us all. ~Ron~
Grade:Good


Given By: CountryAngel
Critique Date:03/31/2008
Critique:I like this one :)  Makes you think about spring !
Grade:Good


Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:03/31/2008
Critique:Boy, you sure wrote how most of us feel about this time of year and so eloquently. Pretty and happy vision you create here, I enjoyed it. Dennis
Grade:Excellent


 
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