CATEGORY: Free Verse Bookmark and Share



Some Poems

Some Poems…..


 


Flowing, just like Mama’s fat tears


Which really worried and confused me


On Sisy Martha’s graduation as a nurse,


Some poems are.


 


Counting the fine legs of a millipede


Is it taxing or adventurous?


The answer is best known to the individual.


Some poems are just  like that.


 


I have seen people going wild,  attacking, destroying,  revolting.


Yes a real revolution being formed.


Demanding Freedom, Peace, Equality, not forgetting Transparency!


Believe me, some  poems are fuel they use.


 


A mistress, imagine, an angel for that sense,


Falling in the ugly  and scrupulous hands of a born-crook


Who plays sense with imagery, rhythm, meter……………


Some poems shed many in grief,  anger,  disappointment, depression……


 


Words so rich, so powerful, of love’s own making


Expressing best the inner coating of the heart,


The refined thought of the wandering mind.


Some poems are wonders coupled with miracles when read.


 


Of course, some either are poisonous or dangerous.


Whilst others are action-packed and consumable.


But some remain  numerous outlets


Of both sorrow and joy: Emotions……………………


 


 



by Musimwa

Show Brief Description

You must log-on in order to critique and grade any writings. Login here.


Other Critiques of this Work
Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:04/03/2008

Critique:Your poem was very well put together and contained so much food for thought. Poetry is a human's outlet to express, like you said, emotions. One of your deepest writes. I also like how you try to emcompass an overview of poetry, and you come so close . It can be used for so many different purposes, is there one  definition that fits, I will probably be thinking about that  for a long time to come. Good job, Dennis
[View Replies]

Grade:Excellent


 
One-Stop Write Shop LLC Copyright 2007-2011
301275 visitors since November 2007!
1338 total writings, and growing!
Members Only
Writers Station
Logon
User Action Menu View Portfolio View Public Profile View Blog Send Private Message