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Angel

I want to be an angel

Watching you from above

While you stretch out your hand to me

I want to be an angel

Swimming in the clouds

Flying in the skies every day

I want to be an angel

Happy and carefree as a new born baby

Reflecting colours of the rainbow

I want to be an angel

Your very own guardian angel

Able to provide whenever you're in need

I want to be an angel

by Dorie (Viewed 1051 times)

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Given By:	CountryAngel
Critique Date:	04/12/2008

Critique:	I DO believe in angels... I liked all the writing. Yes, if only we could be an angel !!!!


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Given By:	Dennis
Critique Date:	04/11/2008

Critique:	I liked your poem, it would be great if we all had a gardian angel. Heaven knows I need one, or maybe I have always had one over the years but never zeroed in on it. You write, right to the point and that is refreshing, thanks for sharing. Dennis
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Given By:	[Deleted User]
Critique Date:	04/11/2008

Critique:	A very sweet poem! Nice work, Dorie.
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