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Angel

I want to be an angel


Watching you from above


While you stretch out your hand to me




 I want to be an angel


Swimming in the clouds


Flying in the skies every day



 I want to be an angel


Happy and carefree as a new born baby


Reflecting colours of the rainbow


 


I want to be an angel


Your very own guardian angel


Able to provide whenever you're in need




I want to be an angel



by Dorie (Viewed 641 times)

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Given By: CountryAngel
Critique Date:04/12/2008
Critique:I DO believe in angels... I liked all the writing. Yes, if only we could be an angel !!!!
Grade:Good


Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:04/11/2008
Critique:I liked your poem, it would be great if we all had a gardian angel. Heaven knows I need one, or maybe I have always had one over the years but never zeroed in on it. You write, right to the point and that is refreshing, thanks for sharing. Dennis
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Grade:Good


Given By: Katina
Critique Date:04/11/2008
Critique:A very sweet poem! Nice work, Dorie.
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Grade:Good


 
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