| CATEGORY: Haiku |
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Sky
The sky is dark now
stars shining bright with sparkle
amazing moon light
by CountryAngel (Viewed 602 times)
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| Given By: |   dragon 
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| Critique Date: | 02/04/2009 |
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| Critique: | A poem of wondrous and glorious imagary |
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| Given By: |   kuirq
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| Critique Date: | 07/19/2008 |
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| Critique: | It's nice how you wrote it in the present tense. This way, you made the reader see the sky with you, capturing the image of the sky as you saw it. Wonderful imagery indeed! |
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| Given By: |  Katina
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| Critique Date: | 06/18/2008 |
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| Critique: | 4 Stars! Beautiful poem. |
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| Given By: |  raenie
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| Critique Date: | 06/18/2008 |
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| Critique: | A very wonderful haiku you have here, Diane :) I really liked the 2nd line, of how you used sparkle as an adjective and not as a verb...pretty much descriptive of our sky right now actually (it's a full moon tonight) & the nightsky is just amazing... |
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| Given By: | bluemoon
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| Critique Date: | 05/08/2008 |
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| Critique: | Hi Diane, nice image here. I like the moon & the stars, something magical & mystical about them. |
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