CATEGORY: Science Fiction
The Second Untitled Titled Story of the MMS
"Yes, sir." Mikayla said. She nodded her head as she said it. She knew it would come to this. She would have to face a court eventually. "Is it true that Mr. Milkoswitz asked about the rights he had as a part of the Interglobal Government?" the lawyer asked. He stared Mikayla in the eye, trying to intimidate her.
"Yes, sir." She wouldn't break. There was no defense for a man who tried to be the next "ruler of the universe". She knew it. It didn't matter if this lawyer had lost zero cases in twenty years. She was a Solutionist, and the descendant of the creator of the MMS at that.
"What was your reply to Mr. Milkoswitz's inquiry to his designated rights as a human begin and global citizen?" the lawyer said, twisting his word to make Egor Milkoswitz seem lass guilty.
"I replied that his rights were terminated as stated in the Interglobal Code of Peace." she said, thinking back to the day everyone called her a hero. She had solved the answer to one question that could have sent the Earth into the steep spiral of dictatorship. She had figured out the password to the virus sent into global headquarters of the MMS. The MMS was a computer system invented by Megan Smith in 2025 that took control of diplomacy, military, trade, and everyday life. The MMS had crashed four months ago and Solutionists, the head scientists who worked on and controlled the MMS, had not known the answer. Then, in an amazing stroke of brilliance, Mikayla had Egor and his sidekick, James captured and the MMS was up and running.
"Where did you get your information on the termination of Mr. Milkoswitz?" the lawyer said, trying to make her slip up, to say something that would discredit her.
"My source was from the Interglobal Code of Peace itself. In Article 24, Section 5, Paragraphs 2 through 5 state that a traitor, terrorist, or otherwise harm to international safety has the rights stated in the above sections, until they cause harm, destruction, damage, or otherwise intervene or hamper the activities leading to the well-being of any nation. If there is suspicion of misuse of this section, it will be determined by an interglobal council consisting of at least ten countries and three representatives of the nation or nations in peril. Those representatives shall justify the reasons for the invalidation of the accused's rights." Mikayla said. She was determined to prove that she had not done wrong. This was not her trial, it was Egor's. He was the one who had tried to bring "back" Russia. He was the one who had twisted the reputation of the Communist USSR to try and destroy the MMS and interglobal peace.
"May I ask you what you believe Mr. Milkoswitz has done to harm the well-being of any nation? To clarify my question, you have been noted as suggestion Mr. Milkoswitz as an attempted murder. How is that so?"
"First, I must state that the MMS system controls almost everything. That includes the military. If there are false signals sent, many things can happen. That includes mass failures, leading to the death of many men and women. Not to mention what would happen if there was a false declaration of war. If one is responsible for a death, is it not called murder when it is intentional?" By the time she was through, she knew it was one small victory. It was inconceivable that after four months there was any question to what Egor had done. The chip was tested and proved to have been made on his laptop. He was found on the run in the Aleutian Islands. He had practically confessed!
"I have nothing more to ask this witness. The defense rests." The lawyer said.
"Thank you for the clarification, Ms. Smith. You may step down now." the head of the interglobal council, who was presiding over the trial, said. Mikayla stepped off the stand and walked out the doors. As a key witness, she was not allowed to hear other testimonies. She was walking down the hallway in the compound when someone pulled her into a room on her left. There was no light in the room. As her eyes adjusted she could only see the outline of the person who grabbed her.
"Did you testify already?" the voice of the black outline said. There was a hint of an accent, Scandinavian perhaps.
"Y... yes." Mikayla stuttered. Did she know this voice?
"You must go to the council and say you lied on the stand, or else." The voice said. Mikayla saw a swift movement and felt the cold spikes of a NeruoGun pressed to the side of her head. NeuroGuns were guns that sent a painful, electric shock through the body, and could be set on variable settings, including a lethal one.
"Why? I said the truth." Mikayla said. As soon as she said it she wished she could change what se said. The spikes were pushed harder into her head.
"You will be very sorry." The voice said.
"When? Mikayla asked. She was referring to when she would go to the council.
"Tomorrow afternoon. You must not make it suspicious. Request an appointment for and urgent matter with the head. Say you thought about your testimony overnight and felt guilty about lying on the stand. You must admit you never told Igor Milkoswitz his rights were terminated, invalidating his capture. Do you understand me?"
"Yes." As the saboteur pushed her out into the hall, Mikayla saw a streak of light hit short, shoulder-length black hair. Once in the hall, without a single glance back, Mikayla walked over to an automated water cooler and took a drink. She walked down the hall, out the door, and to a hover jet. As the hover jet flew her to her hotel, she had one of her legendary self-reflections. She had may over the past few months. What was she going to do? She couldn't lie, first of all it would be wrong, and second, she would be giving Egor a mistrial. It would be exactly what the mysterious person wanted. She would be completely discredited.
The hover jet landed and she stepped out of the round vehicle and walked through the automatic doors into the hotel. She stepped onto an escalator that was standard on every public building around. She walked into the suite she rented and sat in the chair. She wanted to cry and scream at the same time. Right before she crossed the edge of her emotional breakdown, her watch beep-ed. She looked down at the familiar electronic screen. It read "Call from Jeff Rollings". Mikayla accepted the call.
"Hello, Jeff." She said.
"How is everything going?" Jeff asked. Mikayla didn't know if it was safe to tell him.
"As good as can be expected under the circumstances." Mikayla said. Actually, it wasn't a lie. Of course, you had to remember the circumstances were being blackmailed on the threat of death. Actually, she really wasn't doing that bad at all.
"That is a relief. How is Madam President?"
"She is fine. The Queen of England and she have been on a shopping trip.
"Man, I am sorry I missed that." She joked.
"That is what I told her. Mikayla, she is worried about you and so am I. We have heard about the lawyer's tactics. It is intense. How are you really holding up?"
"Trust me, the lawyer isn't the problem."
"Fine. When do you think the trial will be over?"
"Oh, I'm not really sure. It could be soon, or it might drag on."
"Well, I have to go, but make sure to keep in touch."
"Will do. Bye." Mikayla said, clicking off the watch. Mikayla sat on her bed reading, and fell asleep like that. When she woke up in the morning, she rubbed her face with her hands. She got dressed. She looked into the mirror in the bathroom. What am I doing, she thought. She couldn't just roll over. She had to fix this. Whoever had threatened her would be watching. She had to outsmart them. Mikayla arrived at the courthouse on time. Well, it was on time for her. She had three minutes to spare. She stood outside the door until she heard the thud of the gavel. She threw open the doors. She might as well make this dramatic, right? People throughout the courtroom stared in pure shock.
"Ms. Smith, what is the meaning of this?" the head of the council asked.
"Your honor, I have a problem with my testimony. I need to revise it." Mikayla said. Murmurs surrounded her.
"Bailiff, please escort Ms. Smith to our chambers. This court is hereby in recess for one hour." Mikayla was still working on her plan in her head.
An hour later, Mikayla emerged from the chamber, with a sullen look on her face, followed by the bailiff and the council. The head of the council, John Skims, looked troubled. Mikayla stood in the middle of the courtroom.
"New evidence was recently brought to my attention and it call the legitimacy of this trial into question. I am forced to call for an investigation. Until such time, the trial is suspended." John said. He banged the gavel and walked to his chambers. Egor had a triumphant smile on his face. Mikayla strode out of the doors ahead of everyone.
"I've got it!" Mikayla screamed. It was a week later. She had days of sleepless nights. Her green eyes were tired from staring endlessly at computer screens. The people at her table looked up. There was George St. Clair, Catherine James, Shane O'Conner, and Karem Dareem. They were all Solutionists from other countries. They had been the ones to help her solve the problems with the MMS when Egor had sabotaged it.
"Where?" Catherine said.
"Egor has been romantically linked to Alyssa Pernell. ‘Ms. Pernell was rejected for the job of Head Solutionist in the United States of America when it was uncovered she had been a Russian spy. Pernell was accepted as a member of the MMS survey team in the Aleutian Islands.' We have it!" Mikayla read from the computer. She had searched every inch of Egor's life and found it! "Does it have a picture of her and contact information?" Kareem asked.
"Yes." Mikayla said in a daze. The woman who showed up in the picture confirmed all of her suspicions. Alyssa Pernell had a light complexion, blue eyes, and black, shoulder-length hair. It was the woman who had threatened Mikayla.
"She is smarter than her boyfriend. She disabled the tracking element in her watch." Shane said. George was already on the phone with the council.
"Check her NeuroGun." Mikayla said. Every weapon had a built in tracking chip, the general public just didn't know about it. In fact, most of the people who made weapons didn't know about it.
"She is close to Chile. She is in the water." One of them called out. Mikayla's adrenaline was pumping. "I am going with these hover jets." Mikayla said. She was out the door and at the nearest airport in and instant. The hover jet was a new model. It went three times as fast, as 2400 km/h (approximately 1491 mph). They arrived at the Chilean border quickly. A ship pulled up not long after. Mikayla looked around the decks. The MPs, Military Police, had the exits blocked off. She spotted her. Alyssa Pernell had dark glasses and a blue outfit. Mikayla grabbed her arm.
"Let go!" Alyssa yelled.
"I, Mikayla Louise Smith, hereby declare your rights, as stated in the Interglobal Code of Peace, invalidated on the grounds of terrorism. Alyssa Jane Pernell, you are under arrest for the attempted murder of a Solutionist, terrorism against the interglobal community, and blackmail. Your rights have been stated to you in the presence of the Military Police." Mikayla said.
"How did you find me?" Alyssa said.
"Well, I guess that will be my secret." Mikayla said. Alyssa was tried and convicted on all charges. Egor Milkoswitz was convicted and sentenced to four life sentences for trying to bring down the interglobal community, multiple counts of terrorism, blackmail, conspiring to invalidate and interglobal trial, and conspiring in the attempted murder of a Solutionist. Most importantly, Mikayla missed the President's shopping trip.
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| Given By: | Katina
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| Critique Date: | 05/10/2008 |
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| Critique: | Since I have not read the first part, I am a little lost. From part of the story I have read, I can tell that you do your best work in scene. The dialogue is good. My initial suggestion is to create a great title. Something that will make a reader interested in reading your work. If this is part two or chapter two of a larger manuscript, it may help to list this in the title somewhere. Using "the untitled title" does not do much for the reader:) You have to know what your story is about, in order to come up with a great title. sometimes the title is the hardest part to create, so keep working on it, and I'm sure it will come to you. As soon as I read the other piece, I will return to the second part to read it again to give you a better review. For now, I'm grading this as "good." My grade may be changed, once I read the other section. Thank you for becoming a member, and for posting your work! :) |
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| Given By: | Dennis
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| Critique Date: | 05/09/2008 |
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| Critique: | Very very good! You have your juices flowing in this part of your novel but I hope it is not over yet. Mikayla, your main character has dynamic qualities and pushes forward no matter what she may encounter, very believeable. You have a way to add excitement in almost every line, an urgency perhaps that has the reader looking foward to the next line. Not too many writers can do that in a fast paced action plot. Let something else happen with the same urgency and let Mikayla swoop in and solve that one too. What I am saying is do not stop here, continue getting her involved with all kinds of dramas because you write them well. Sincerely enjoyed your write and look foward to reading the next part. Dennis |
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