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Halcyon Heaven

babbling brook, cool, clear


tempted toes, longing, yearning


soothing sigh ... heaven



by bluemoon (Viewed 128 times)

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Given By: Katina
Critique Date:05/10/2008
Critique:I love this haiku! So vivid, and crisp, I am found of adjectives. Great work Sharon!!
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Grade:Excellent


Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:05/09/2008
Critique:You hit it home with a very pleasent experience, one that most people can relate to, the pleasure of reliefe, ah! I could envision the experience and it made me laugh thinking nice thoughts. Your use of so few words tells me you give it thought and consideration while crafting Haikus that relate. Dennis
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Grade:Excellent


 
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