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A Thought.

And now I feel very good.

Happy with my life with a love for all life forms

Humanity.

we must learn to love it,

We as humans must learn to love ourselves.

Humanity,

It is who we are.

by Vivo (Viewed 167 times)

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Given By:	Dennis
Critique Date:	05/19/2008

Critique:	A short write but very to the point. I like the line "Happy with my life with a love for all life forms", very broad in scope and yet you narrow it down to Humanity. It would be nice if your words were heeded by the masses, but, as you know, it is not always the case. Good write! Dennis
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Given By:	CountryAngel
Critique Date:	05/17/2008

Critique:	Yes, and so it is true !!! But not everyone can do it... Nice vivo


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